This post is where we write just with small words. It does not sound tough, does it? But it is, if you are not this guy. (No, he does not play quite this game in that page, but it's close. And I have seen him play this game; damn, he's good.)
Feel free to say "Bzzt!" when one of us screws up. That is half the fun. Bzzt! Bzzt! Yes, I do like that.
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January 14 2005, 22:42:01 UTC 7 years ago
and the long held hate of Jove's proud wife,
came at last, cast out of Troy, to the coast
near Rome. The wrath of gods did test his strength
on land and sea, through that long rage. Much grief,
too, was his in war, till he should build his town
and bring his home's gods to what would soon be Rome.
Help me, O Muse, say why: why did the queen
of gods drive a man so right, so known for good
and for his love of all the gods, to so much pain?
Did he wrong the gods? Was there some slight?
Have the gods so much spite? Is that what it is to be a god?
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January 16 2005, 09:18:49 UTC 7 years ago
It helped a lot that I used a book by my fave, Rolfe. He likes short words. And so do I: they sing out. As that grand old man Win once said, "Short words are best and the old words when short are best of all."
I've made a start on some lines from Book 4, the big death curse scene, but I'm stuck. How do I say that one word? "Guy who will come and stomp on the son's sons of that man what did me wrong?" Um, no. I'll have to find a way to fudge it.
January 16 2005, 09:57:34 UTC 7 years ago
queen of gods, to whom my grief flows,
god of the dark moon, to whom the crossed roads
howl at night, Kind Ones, shield me, hear my prayer.
If he must come safe to land, then so he must,
if Jove wills it, though he be false
and more vile than words can say. If Jove wills it,
it is fixed. So be it. Hear my prayer.
Let war and arms drive him out, cast him out,
let him lose his son, let him beg for aid,
let him see his friends die like whipped dogs,
let him beg on his knees and cry for war's end,
let him not see the light he long hopes for,
let him fall and die, let him lie dead in the sand
for the crows. Oh, hear me as I pray to you,
I pour it out with my heart's last blood!
And you, all you of Tyre, must hate and hate
these men of Troy and all their race. Give
my dust this one laud, your hate for them: no truce,
no love, no peace, a hate that does not yield.
Rise from my bones, some fierce son of Tyre,
Hunt them with fire and sword,
Now, then, here, there, as strength comes to you,
shore set on shore, wave on wave, and war,
war, no end to war, a war passed down from son to son.
January 16 2005, 18:23:17 UTC 7 years ago
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January 17 2005, 03:58:16 UTC 7 years ago
It was to be next from the post Cam made where she made old words new in rhyme.
January 17 2005, 06:44:11 UTC 7 years ago
Heh heh. Icks de class. *snort* Oh, I slay me. I read a few icks in class in my time at high school. Icks of class, ticks of Rome, you name it.
January 17 2005, 18:44:06 UTC 7 years ago
It is hard to shift from the long word place to this one. Brain could not split 'Sax' from 'ons', got stuck, took the "short" cut that made my thought hard to get. I blame drugs (for cold *sniff* - but I am on the mend, yay).
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January 17 2005, 04:15:03 UTC 7 years ago
When did the strong turn to wrong? When the coin of plain truth was made base, I think. I post a link: what E. Blair had to say.
January 18 2005, 01:58:12 UTC 7 years ago
I think this is the last one for a while. *takes a bow*
January 18 2005, 07:11:48 UTC 7 years ago
Wow. That feeds my heart.
I know once more (as I knew years back) how hard this game is to play, and how hard it is to play as well as you.
January 18 2005, 07:50:14 UTC 7 years ago
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This makes me wish I was a fan of that poem. I have too many bags and trunks from the bad old days for that, but you have made here a work of great craft.
January 18 2005, 19:36:46 UTC 7 years ago
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huh.
I need a word, can you guess what it is? My brain may be all fuzz, or it may be a hard thing to find...So, I see that 'son' works here, I see that 'man' works here, but if I were to say "I am a girl" it would not be quite right. Once more I am stuck with long words, for my sex and age (in one word), in my head. 'Queen' and 'muse' work well in their place, but that place is not mine. I could steal "Frau" from the folk of the Rhine, but that still does not seem right. My brain will not play nice, I can think of no word that is what I want. Help?
January 18 2005, 18:49:25 UTC 7 years ago
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It's just a hard thing to find. You have to twist your way round it. "The one in pink with the high heels" works, if she is in pink and high heels. "Gal" has been used a lot back in the old days. (I know, ick, but still.)January 18 2005, 20:04:54 UTC 7 years ago
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Too there is 'femme', 'miss', and, God strike me, 'chick'.It takes a large word list in the brain to find the right small words, I think.
February 9 2005, 20:50:18 UTC 7 years ago
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"Mom"? (runs off and hides)January 19 2005, 14:57:32 UTC 7 years ago
January 19 2005, 23:56:48 UTC 7 years ago
And my brain is in a freeze.
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